Originally Posted by clairepompey
Here it is don't know if I am very keen on it tried lots of different things
Sometimes I takes me a few tries at it before I like the results. You've got the basics down, now if you're still not happy with it, you can always rework it til you do like it. :) I like the background you've used and the photo is great! I like how you've repeated the butterfly in your journaling and in the cluster.. Try different title styles and fonts for your title. Sometimes the title can change the entire look of your layout. You might also try adding a few shadows to give it a bit of depth.